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Time To Put Your Sea Legs On by ~letmeholdyou:iconletmeholdyou:





She looks into the mirror and doesn't like what she sees,
A life full of hidden secrets and dreams that will never be.
A girl who falls down everytime she tries to get back up on her feet.
She excels in what she does and hints that that is all,
She never lets anyone know how she feels when she's alone.
She lingers on all her disappointments like it's all she's ever known.
When she does something great she acts like it was never done.
Because it's her it can't be good enough, too stupid, too ugly, too down.
She'll never ever see what she really is, even with a crown.
You tell her that you love her and what she sees is a lie,
cause why would someone love her when all she does is cry?
Who would want to be with her when there's all those other girls?
They're so much prettier and smarter with so much extra charm.
Measured with boyfriends she sure doesn't quite stack up,
Even all the truly ugly and stupid girls are all hooking up.
They act like its nothing while she sits home and stares.
She wonders why nobody likes her, why nobody cares.
She feels so abandoned, so hollow and alone,
But with what society has taught her how would she have ever known?
©2006-2009 ~letmeholdyou
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Just random things off of the top of my head

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:iconraecharles:
i really liked this one!

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imitation is suicide
:iconletmeholdyou:
yay! thanks so much
:iconselinesaintclair:
I love this... is so sad.
:iconaedammair-feline:
i dont understand how the title fits, but still it was a very interesting and truthful read. i know people like that even now....

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..:skullbones: Aedammair-Feline :skullbones:..

I wanna hurt you just to hear you screaming my name.......
:iconmissvanessasue:
I loved that....thank you....

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~Veil~

Dream of revenge so your hate will grow,
Things you believe you are actually owed,
A love you shall never know....
:iconletmeholdyou:
I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the :+fav:
:iconletmeholdyou:
Your welcome and thank you for the :+fav:
:iconletmeholdyou:
The title doesn't fit perfectly but it was more of just a random thought than anything else. . its sad isn't it?
:iconselinesaintclair:
No prob the pleasures all mine...MINE!!!!! :evillaugh:

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